Happy Halloweensie!

Susanna Leonard Hill, a true kidlit treasure, hosts these amazing holiday contests that challenge writers to think creatively and efficiently. With a limit of 100 words, I wanted to try some free verse this year. But then I wanted to see it rhyme. Rhyming is SO HARD!! I won’t even tell you how many “practice” stanzas I wrote but it was definitely fun.

The Contest: write a 100 word Halloween story appropriate for children (children here defined as 12 and under), using the words potion, cobweb, and trick.  Your story can be scary, funny, sweet, or anything in between, poetry or prose, but it will only count for the contest if it includes those 3 words and is 100 words (you can go under, but not over!)  Get it?  Halloweensie – because it’s not very long and it’s for little people. You can read more about the contest here!

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THE ITSY BITSY WITCH
By Nicole Loos Miller (93 words)

Bitsy frowned on her web,
Eight eyes and a scowl.
The bugs flew right by,
And her stomach did growl.

“A potion,” she thought
“Should do just the trick!”
She gathered ingredients,
Her cauldron, her stick.

“A special new spell
To make escape tricky.
My cobweb will glow.
It’ll be extra sticky!”

Dawn started to creep
As the brew came to a bubble.
She hoped it’d be ready
And worth all the trouble.

“I did it,” she yelled
As the silk threads did twitch.
Not hungry, but happy,
Was the eight-legged witch. 

22 responses

  1. teacherwriteracker Avatar

    It flows beautifully!! Well done.

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you, Monica! I had a lot of help 🙂

  2. sjwmeade Avatar

    So cute! Lovely rhymes, Nicole. Great job!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thanks, Sarah! I love your stories too 🙂 Just need to comment on them!

  3. Nancy Riley Avatar
    Nancy Riley

    Fun rhyme. Good luck!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you, Nancy! I can’t wait to read everyone else’s entries!

  4. Maria Marshall Avatar

    Great job Nicole. Best of Luck.

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you, Maria!

  5. Glenda Roberson Avatar
    Glenda Roberson

    Awesome story, Nicole! I love the glowing, sticky web.

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you, Glenda! For your sweet words and for all your rhyming help!

  6. Melissa Miles Avatar
    Melissa Miles

    Great descriptive language! 😊

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you, Melissa!

  7. Colleen Owen Murphy Avatar
    Colleen Owen Murphy

    I love that your spider witch is happy even before she catches anyone in her sticky web! Great job and good luck!

  8. Rachel Funez Avatar

    Very cute story! I’m always impressed by people who can write in rhyme. Good luck with the contest.

  9. Christina Dendy Avatar

    Clever idea! 🙂

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you so much, Christina!

  10. vgraboski61gmailcom Avatar
    vgraboski61gmailcom

    Great rhyming. Very cute! Good Luck.

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you so much!

  11. Jilanne Hoffmann Avatar

    Nice mash-up of itsy-bitsy spider and witch! Good luck in the contest!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you, Jilianne!

  12. ciaraoneal Avatar

    Glowing webs! I’m yelling eek and fascinated at the same time!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      I wish I had some glowing web decorations to throw about for Halloween! 🙂

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