Seeds of Love


SEEDS OF LOVE (200 words)
By Nicole Loos Miller

“The world needs more love,” says Grandma.
She sets a flower pot on the table. 
We paint it with hearts for Valentine’s Day.
I don’t know about love, but the world has more color at least.  

The seed is tiny, but Grandma says not to underestimate it.
What kind of seed is it? 
But she won’t tell me.
“Life is better when there is room for wonder,” she whispers.

Poke. Dig. Poke. 
The dark dirt sticks under my fingernails. 
Scoop. Scoop. Scoop. 
Back over my seed. Like a cozy blanket.

See you soon, little seed. 

You are my sunshine, I sing. 
My watering can is a gentle rainstorm. 
Push. Push. Up!
A tiny bit of green starts to show. 
You can do it.

Grow. 
Secrets, bunched and waiting on a thin green stem. 
Grow.
A little taller each day.
Stretch.

At last!
A tiny star surrounded by pink.  
Bright and delicate.
Lovely and strong. 

“Who should we give it to?’ Grandma asks.
I want to keep it.
“Love is for sharing,” she insists.
We leave it on our neighbors doorstep. 

“We did it,” laughs Grandma.
And she’s right. 
I can feel it. 
There’s more love now. 

From just one seed. 

[This story was written for Susanna Leonard Hill‘s Valentiny contest! The challenge: Write a kid’s Valentine’s story in 214 words or less in which someone is curious. Honored that this story won first place!]

23 responses

  1. Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez Avatar

    Aww, Nicole, this is such a tender story. I got the happy chills at the end, and each section was so well-worded. You’re a natural story teller!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you so much Kaitlyn! <3

      1. Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez Avatar

        You’re welcome! Thanks for sharing and good luck!

  2. sjwmeade Avatar

    Awww! Nicole, I love the new ending. So sweet!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you, Sarah! 🙂 And thank you for reading and giving feedback too!

  3. Glenda Roberson Avatar
    Glenda Roberson

    You know how I love nature. This is super sweet and lovable!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you, Glenda!

  4. Colleen Owen Murphy Avatar
    Colleen Owen Murphy

    I love this line: “Life is better when there is room for wonder,” she whispers.

    You did a nice job with this story. Good luck in the contest.

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you so much, Colleen! I love reading all the amazing stories.

      1. Colleen Owen Murphy Avatar
        Colleen Owen Murphy

        I agree Nicole. And you are welcome.

  5. teacherwriteracker Avatar

    This is beautiful!!!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you, Monica!

  6. Maryna Doughty Avatar
    Maryna Doughty

    Lovely! I had so many favorite parts! I loved “My watering can is a gentle rainstorm” and “Love is for sharing.” So sweet, Nicole. 🙂

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      I’m so glad you liked it, Maryna! Thank you 🙂

  7. Nancy Riley Avatar
    Nancy Riley

    What a sweet story. Great imagery. Good luck!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you so much, Nancy!

  8. Kelly Conroy Avatar

    Aww, very cute!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you so much, Kelly!

  9. chardixon47 Avatar
    chardixon47

    Beautiful language and heart. Good Luck!

  10. jeanjames926 Avatar

    What a sweet story. I too liked, “Life is better when there is room for wonder.” Best of luck with your story.

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you so much, Jean 🙂

  11. Susanna Leonard Hill Avatar

    What a lovely story, Nicole! And so beautifully written! Great job leaving us “room to wonder” and keeping our curiosity piqued as we waited to discover what would grow! And such a nice message. Thanks for joining in the Valentiny fun!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you so much for hosting these amazing contests, Susanna! And thank you for your kind words too <3

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