Happy Halloweensie!

[UPDATE: THRILLED to share that this story was given an Honorable Mention for Great Read for Younger Readers!]

It’s one of my favorite times of year: Susanna Leonard Hill’s Halloweensie contest for children’s writers! I love these contests. They challenge my brain to think in new ways and almost always inspire multiple stories. Plus, this year, they are the best kind of happy distraction from… you know… everything else.

The challenge: write a halloween-themed children’s story in 100 words or less and include the words skeleton, mask, and creep.

Without further a-boo, here is my 2020 Halloweensie story:

PUMPKIN HUNT (100 words)
By Nicole Loos Miller

Hello, little Skeleton. What are you doing?

I’m going on a pumpkin hunt.

A pumpkin hunt?

A pumpkin hunt!
I’m going on a pumpkin hunt. I’m gonna pick a big one!
Tiptoe. Tiptoe.
Ooh, a white pumpkin!
NO! IT’S A GHOST!

Don’t worry, little Skeleton. It’s just a mask.

Oh, um, I knew that.
I’m going on a pumpkin hunt!
I’m gonna pick a big one!
Creep. Creep. Creep.
A green pumpkin?
ACK! A MONSTER!

Mask again, little Skelton.

Oh, whew! 
Back to the pumpkin hunt.
Skitter, skitter, step.
Oh! Nice mask.

Uh, little Skeleton… that’s not a mask! 

AHHHHH!

32 responses

  1. Sarah Meade Avatar

    “Without further a-boo!” LOL Great story, Nicole! I love the formatting and the spooky twist.

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you, Sarah!

  2. melissamiles1 Avatar

    Love this take on the bear hunt. Very clever and fun to read!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you so much, Melissa!

  3. colleendougherty Avatar

    What a cute story!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you so much, Colleen!

  4. Colleen Owen Murphy Avatar
    Colleen Owen Murphy

    I like the back and forth of your story, as well as the cute ending. Good luck!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thanks, Colleen!

  5. Maryna Doughty Avatar

    Fun twist ending, Nicole! The formatting was fun, too! Also, I LOVE “without further a-boo”! So clever and cute!!!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you so much, Maryna!

  6. arndt4writing Avatar
    arndt4writing

    This is ADORABLE! I love it! Great job, Nicole!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you so much, Daniele!

  7. Glenda Roberson Avatar

    Loved your story and it’s creative formatting. It reminded me of *hunting for wabbits,” lol.

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Hah! Love that!

  8. Connie Bergstein Dow Avatar

    Very cute story!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you, Connie!

  9. brittanypomales Avatar

    Oh, I wonder which “mask” was real! And love the idea of a pumpkin hunt.

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you so reading, Brittany! 🙂

  10. Jill Lambert Avatar

    I really like the way you structured this and the surprise at the end, Nicole. So cute! Best of luck in the contest!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you so much, Jill!

  11. M.A. Cortez Avatar
    M.A. Cortez

    I love the rhythm of your story and the different colored pumpkins is fun and unique. Good luck!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar
  12. Nancy Riley Avatar
    Nancy Riley

    What a great twist on Bear Hunt! Very cute!

  13. teacherwriteracker Avatar

    Hahaha!!! This is such a fun entry. Good luck!

  14. Jilanne Hoffmann Avatar

    Great use of rule of three with a surprise at the end! Poor little skeleton….Good luck!

  15. Chel Owens Avatar

    Ha, ha! Great pumpkin hunt!

  16. heathercmorris Avatar

    Very clever and cute! Good luck to you!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you, Heather 🙂

  17. ptnozell Avatar

    I love the back & forth dialogue and twist at the end. Great job!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you so much, Patricia!

  18. Ciara N M Greenwalt Avatar

    Oh, how cute! I love the flip of expectations at the end!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you so much, Ciara!

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