Stella & Hank

STELLA & HANK
By Nicole Loos Miller
(212 words)

Stella was the perfect cat:
Gorgeous,
And charming, 
And oh-so-soft.

She was loved by all,
Especially Hank.

Hank was the perfect dog:
Huge, 
And drooly, 
And oh-so-playful.

He was loved by everyone…
Except Stella.

Hank tried to win
Stella’s affection
With rope-pulls,
And slobbery bones,
Even his favorite stuffie.

But Stella flattened her ears,
Wrinkled her whiskers,
And turned her tail.

When Hank came near,
Stella’s claws came out.

When Hank whimpered, 
Stella HISSSSSSSSED.
When Hank howled a love tune,
Stella SMACKED.
And when he tried to give her a bath…
YIKES!

Poor Hank.

Then, one February day,
Stella 
Went 
Away 
And 
Hank 
Sighed
And 
Waited
And 
Sighed
And 
Waited
Until…

She finally came back
With a big plastic collar
That went up instead of down.

Stella was sore, 
And sad,
And sleepy,
And it broke Hank’s heart.

He gathered his courage,
And his bones,
And his stuffie.
He risked a HISS,
And a SMACK,
And even a SWIPE,
To put his offering at her feet.

Stella opened one eye.
She considered him closely.
And
Scooted 
To 
The 
Right.

Enough room for a large dog
(If he stayed very quiet).

Hank barely dared to breathe.
Stella started to purr.
It was the best Valentine’s ever
Because he spent it next to her.

(This story was written for Susanna Leonard Hill’s Valentiny writing contest! Contest rules include creating a story for children with a full story arc in 214 words or less. This year the theme was “brave.” Read more about it here. This story won sixth place!)


13 responses

  1. Sarah Meade Avatar

    Love Stella and sweet Hank! What a cozy ending image.

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you, Sarah!

  2. teacherwriteracker Avatar

    Sooo sweet! I audibly awwwed at the end.

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      🙂 That makes me smile! Thank you, Monica!

  3. heathercmorris Avatar

    So heart-warming!! Hank – you are so brave!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you, Heather! 🙂 Your comment made me laugh!

  4. Meena Avatar
    Meena

    Siiiiiigh and I’m crying happy-sappy tears now. Beautiful, Nicole! 🙂 🙂 🙂

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Oh, Meena! 🙂 Thank you!

  5. Cynthia Stacey Avatar

    Awe. This is so sweet! Love it!

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you so much, Cynthia!

  6. ciaraoneal Avatar

    So cute! I want to snuggle with these two!

  7. katiefischerwrites Avatar

    Oh, that is just so adorable!

    The compare/contrast between Hank and Stella at the start was hilarious and excellently done.

    1. Nicole Loos Miller Avatar

      Thank you so much, Katie!

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