2025 #50PreciousWords

#50PreciousWords is a creation of the amazing Vivian Kirkfield. The challenge is to write a story appropriate for kids, 12 and under, with a beginning, middle, and end, in 50 words or less! Below is my entry for this year. Read all the amazing entries here (and be wow’d by how many different stories can be created in so few words!!)

Vivian has also found a way to make this contest benefit even more people (of course she has!) by introducing the 50 Precious Words Literary Incentive which includes buying a book of your choice from independently owned Toadstool Bookstore (just make sure to specify that the purchase is for #50PreciousWords upon checkout) Books will be donated to local schools! Doesn’t get much better than that! I have so many talented friends that I’ll be buying a couple books to donate this year!

AFTER THE DARKNESS
By Nicole Loos Miller
(50 words)

In the dark
The caterpillar remembers 
sunshine.
And the delicious 
crunch of leaves

But now, 
Everything is squished 
Too tight

When she 
Can barely 
Breathe;

Cannot take  
Anymore

She pushes,
Making her escape
Into the sun

And discovers
She is more
Than she was

And the world
Has been waiting

Published by Nicole Loos Miller

Reader, Writer, Mom, School Social Worker, Cat Lover, Baker. Sometimes I laugh at my own jokes and, also, I think you are great.

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